I read the first two chapters of your novel and I liked the plot line. It's very interesting. Also, the dialogue flow between the characters is amazing! But it would be a clean and a clear read if you give some information about the situation and the setting but apart from that, its a worthy read! Keep up the good work!
The cahracter building for the 1st chapter is good well I guess a tip big settings first let your readers know the setting takes place :D so that they can imagine that in their mind.
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I was liking the story but I just paid for chapter 21 twice and chapter 22 doesn't make sense so I think it's the wrong chapter posted or its suppose to be 23
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