obviously I choose option 3 so I get a beautiful wife and a divine weapon, what more could I ask for?.....................................................
The author uses the MC marrying a fox demon as little more than an excuse for the super natural organization to pay attention to him. No lovey dovey newlywed antics. No heartfelt "I know your a Demon fox, but I love you anyways" confession. Not even an explanation for why he can see her tails poking out of the bottom of her dress at the wedding, but nothing about them when they sleep together.
There is almost zero world building at all. This is a modern world where spiritual energy is awakening causing creatures to transform. That's it. The MC and his wife are apparently well of but nothing about what there jobs are. Only off hand mentions of the MC having just finished a big project and a casual "Oh, by the way" revelation that his wife works at a kindergarten in chapter 20 when she tells him he needs to drop her off early today for the field trip.
I really love the idea behind this book, but it needs more focus on the relationship between the MC and his wife to make the readers care about them. The jealous superior at the supernatural organization, who everyone knows is just a two-bit side character villain, gets more screen time than his beloved wife. I really hope it gets better in the future and the author is just trying to draw it out so that the relationship doesn't feel rushed or forced but right now if feels almost non-existent.
not good , the story is a mess with no details about anything, the fighting sucks and there is no description of the characters appearance or background
bruh why start with a good chapter then destroy it after that? men this is worse than a noob writer or just the translation sucks also is even the minor characters alive i hope so.... they're so dumb for an organization who doesn't even understand how to Manage power and greed and the story feels so rushed that you don't even know if this is a romance at all
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The author uses the MC marrying a fox demon as little more than an excuse for the super natural organization to pay attention to him. No lovey dovey newlywed antics. No heartfelt "I know your a Demon fox, but I love you anyways" confession. Not even an explanation for why he can see her tails poking out of the bottom of her dress at the wedding, but nothing about them when they sleep together.
There is almost zero world building at all. This is a modern world where spiritual energy is awakening causing creatures to transform. That's it. The MC and his wife are apparently well of but nothing about what there jobs are. Only off hand mentions of the MC having just finished a big project and a casual "Oh, by the way" revelation that his wife works at a kindergarten in chapter 20 when she tells him he needs to drop her off early today for the field trip.
I really love the idea behind this book, but it needs more focus on the relationship between the MC and his wife to make the readers care about them. The jealous superior at the supernatural organization, who everyone knows is just a two-bit side character villain, gets more screen time than his beloved wife. I really hope it gets better in the future and the author is just trying to draw it out so that the relationship doesn't feel rushed or forced but right now if feels almost non-existent.
Fir example: bold agent guy says your wife is a fox spirit.
MC be like: Okay.….
Bold agrnt guy: that dude is too clam send more people to observe him!
Bold dude’s Boss then is like: He is not ordinary so therefore we must recruit him!
I can see the strings in this novel so I’ll give it a One star in Story development
Character design is meh so 2 stars.
World background is 1 star as the spirit group government agency is like the rest of the novel is very poorly thought
out.
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