Great story the author has written other, however, I suggest long paragraphs when it comes to things like explaining the world background. Shorten paragraphs then Ithe story will have no problem
Just now started to read... Starting in a slow pace hope will increase the interest level. The lead characters are nicely introduced. Waiting to read more
Aurther san.. great novel.. but need more chapters... Please........................................................................................................................................
I don't usually review, but this novel had me compelled to do this. So far, the it has been a captivating read and it managed to keep me hooked. There is no major Grammer mistakes and till date, Author has never updated an Unedited chapter, which shows how well planned the story is & that Author is serious about it. The world building is quite descriptive, in a slowly unfolding way. It doesn't just make up things. Now, about character development, it is quite clear that the Author is also improving as the story progresses. All the Power rankings and calculations are logically followed. Another thing is that, In Taming novels, starting us great but gradually it becomes trash. But, in here author has maintained the Consistency of everything. So, all in all, I'm looking forward to how the story progresses. Kudos to you Author!
This novel is well write and i thank the author for ir . i will not spoil you it a heroic fantasy world about magic and the stuff but this time the story goes well with it up and down... i hope the author finish this because i really like it
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