All good and amazing at mortal world arc but all thing got hectic once MC went to immortal civilization. The story got more incoherent with previous chapters. This kept happening for hundreds of chapters. No explaining on how and what got him on some situation that you have to backtrack some chapters still confusing how they connects to ongoing storyline. Its still worth reading mortal world arc for those who are interested if they have no other novel to read they find interesting
A compendium of clichés.Just 3 chapters and it was glaringly obvious that this would just be a compendium of clichés full of copy-pasted ideas; as every single one of those 3 chapters was just the development of a cliché, with already the hints of "inspiration" taken from other novels.With such a disastrous beginning, I don't need to read more before dropping this; recommended only to cliché-loving readers, if there are any.
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Great concept irritating storyline. The stupidity of character and forced manipulation of situation is really bad. Which makes this great plot a bad story.
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