Honestly the story is well written in comparison to many others out there but the Author should really work on his depiction of the main character's character as well as habits and train of thoughts. The way he handles issues is off-putting to say the least. His thought process is irrational and dumb and he tends to make seemingly "smart" choices but in depth investigation shows that his choices are actually rather stupid and don't seem progressive. He takes constant loses in dealings and is honestly a character without an ounce of spleen. He can be said to be somewhat of a sycophant and this is till chapter 70 as thats where I reached before nearly puking blood from the frustratiion the mc is causing me. Other than the main character I have loved everything about the novel so far. I highly appreciate the author and would like to encourage him to keep putting out chapters but to also work on this mc's character cause it really prevents people from reading the book when his character is this off putting in the beginning.
I love how they support each other,dumb husky is very childish...but shizun is an adult virgin...can't imagine how much they are in painI've read this up to ch 181
Bad writind, dumb mc, the author use too much parameters that he can't follow his own story.Ridiculous, just writing numbers randomely to make space in te chapters.The idea was good but it's just too bad.
same story copied form i was hoping for a rewrite but you just stole the story form the original author that just wrong.https://***.webnovel.com/book/10649928906087605/Vampire-Primogenitor
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