Mediocre at best. I dont't know if its the translator or the author, but up to ch.80 there is just a lot of inconsistency between chapter and even paragraph, for example at some point it said MC got 3million silver, while few chapters ahead says he broke, never mentioned spending on anything expensive.Another example says "surprisingly he discovered that something add power, but so small that he didin't realize it. WTF man, he discovered but not realize?Beside all that, this novel just got nothing special on it. Lots of CN out there use repetitive template, but that still a better offer, cause they got something unique and special. This on the other side, doesn't use much repetition, but it just lack something 'addictive' that makes you want to read it again. The fight description is good, very good, but that's it. You skip it and you still understood it.The development of the story just plain, nothing worth mentioning. Even the MC is plain, got no quirk except his hardworking, MC might as well be an NPC.
no raws posted, westernized characters, wrong characters name (avril/alice) in chapter 2... probably westernized trash rewrite...ffs why is it so hard to keep same character name consistent throughout the novel... probably cause author/translator doesnt care...
Some of the chapter are missing!! The chapter which Baili Jia Jue & Helian Wei Wei tender moment..When you read it, kinda add confuse to the story because of the missing chapters. The relationship between Wei Wei and Ah Jue gets blurry..So sad..
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