I randomly came across this book to get a change of my normal reading pace. So far it is a very good read and I look forward to continuing to follow along on the journey!
So, by reading the synopses, I noticed that you are passing exactly through the same problem as I did when I started. You are not using full stops at all! I would recommend to buy grammarly or try google docs (I preffer grammarly, though.). Anyway, keep the good work. Gonna give a 5 stars since I can identify myself in your grammar. ;)
Second, this seems to be heading to harem, but for the first 30 chapters I liked it and it did not have many signs of harem, please read some chapters before deciding not to read it because of this aspect since it may change down the road
Also, it is free, no spirit stones required
Lastly, I like this work and highly encourage you to read the first 5 chapters to decide if this is a book you'd like, I guarantee that it's better than some of the other books webnovel is currently supporting.
Personally I really liked the character development not only of the MC but also of the secondary characters, it's rare to see that in Isekai and that's what made me abandon the genre a while ago.
Another positive point, the author takes his time to describe the situation, I think that in a good novel the author shouldn't rush the story since without pictures you need a lot of details to appreciate the story. Good job, nice discovery for me
If you like those stories where the main character goes on adventures in a parallel medieval-like world, then you've come to the right place. What also makes this story unique is that Andrei, the novel's protagonist isn't summoned as some kind of powerful hero. Instead, he tried to figure out his way all by himself.
The way each chapter ends makes you want to dive into the next chapter immediately. The words in this novel are not complicated, and yet they provide vivid sceneries to the mind of the readers.
Overall, this story is very interesting and I recommend it for anyone searching for great stories on this website!
I've read all the chapters and the story is good. It's obvious the author puts in a lot of work and has everything planned out and written in detail.
Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters.
I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building.
The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand.
Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional.
I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine.
I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem!
I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!
Fantasy world, Modern weapons, MC is not dense, not too OP, and uses only what he is thinking, personalities of other MC's are likeable, good plot so far, and their conversations are just funny.
Some descriptions are vague but I think the author has something in mind about that as they get explained later on the chaps.
I enjoyed it because of the characters mostly, but in the recent chapters the battles are building up, the chapters also leaves you wanting to hop on to the next because of the intrigue.
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Second, this seems to be heading to harem, but for the first 30 chapters I liked it and it did not have many signs of harem, please read some chapters before deciding not to read it because of this aspect since it may change down the road
Also, it is free, no spirit stones required
Lastly, I like this work and highly encourage you to read the first 5 chapters to decide if this is a book you'd like, I guarantee that it's better than some of the other books webnovel is currently supporting.
Another positive point, the author takes his time to describe the situation, I think that in a good novel the author shouldn't rush the story since without pictures you need a lot of details to appreciate the story. Good job, nice discovery for me
The way each chapter ends makes you want to dive into the next chapter immediately. The words in this novel are not complicated, and yet they provide vivid sceneries to the mind of the readers.
Overall, this story is very interesting and I recommend it for anyone searching for great stories on this website!
Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters.
I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building.
The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand.
Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional.
I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine.
I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem!
I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!
For the Author.
You need to work hard and improve that's how it's.
First of all if you are writing in third person. It will be better to use past tenses.
And regarding the concept. It's preety good. You have an idea. Now it depends on you, how you can develop it.
As a fellow author, I only wish u best of luck
Some descriptions are vague but I think the author has something in mind about that as they get explained later on the chaps.
I enjoyed it because of the characters mostly, but in the recent chapters the battles are building up, the chapters also leaves you wanting to hop on to the next because of the intrigue.