a good start, the world building is interesting. if there some downside in this novel is probably the mc personality in the start because it give me some mix messages I though he was a bit smart and have decent common sense but then at some later chap, he become a bit idoitic and inconsistent with his mindset, but author said it for the sake of character development. Well overall its a pretty good novel!
Стабильность обновлений на высоте, так сказать впечатляет. Судя по этой истории, мне не терпится увидеть больше (MC) и то, на что он способен в тот момент, мне нравится стиль письма, и я рад видеть, что нас ждет в следующих главах. Мне очень нравится этот роман
writing quality:I was tempted to give 2 stars when I read the first five chapters I mean seriously you are just one level above than MTL. it's awful but I was generous
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Story is very iffy in the beginning but the main character develops into somthing better as it goes.
Keep up the good work Author!!!
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