Into the Zombie World

this got high ratings so i tried it. pretty good concept, but why do you have info dumps in every chapter? first 12 chapters and what do we got? yes you keep saying that you're a beginner writer BUT you could've learned from your predecessors right? chapters are short. At the end of some chapters you said they're a long one, but that's just because of the info dumps. dang there's even a chapter where he only change clothes and inform us his favorite color which is red and black . and don't you try delete this review . already skimmed those chapters up to 60+ but still, can't really bring myself to read this one. anyways, nice try and learn more.

As the author I am not confident on this novel, so if you ever like it just say so on the chapter comments or you can give a review. As long as there are readers, I will do my best to update daily. And of course I will rate my own work  5 stars. Thank you!

Keep in mind that I just gave up at around chapter 40.
I will try to explain my ratings
I am ok with the different buildings as long as there is a comparison. And I am sure alot are alright with it. I usually just dismiss those as fantasy buildings when the info dumps comes in and finally, since I am a filipino, am alright once there are no info dumps.

The reason as to why I rated it 4 is the over explaining things. Like memory and even a katana; the katana was even described with different words, 5 of them in fact.

The info dumps are too much. It is nice to have info dumps but there is just too many. In the whole 40 chapters, it felt like more than half of those chapters are info dumps, unnecessary infodumps even.

The main character is fine up until his attitude turned 180. The character is good and is not provoked easily, later on he saved a group of people then after that he found another group of people. Those guys just warned him not to go there, there was no reason for conflict but then the main character fights the group cause he didn't like what he said

Usual apocalyptic stories are really hard to explain, but you explain it very well

Do not take it into your heart so much. I hope it will help you to progress. Thb its boring, so much useless info something about villages, virus+virus, zombie 1-4 and four system chaps.. I think you should focus more on story dev to graduate it and these chaps point it in 2-4 sentences. Tons of system in novels. Your like trial version, provided info and bye.. nothing playfull, funny.. Its like system how are u? Yes. "o__o". I believe you can do better because i voted for this novel. Add some missions, rewards etc be more creative.

Hi guys,I really appreciate the fantasy world the author has created...you really refine the finer details about the world you are talking about and it's pretty easily picturised in my mind...hope you keep us posted with more chapters...it's a good book to chill with..

Ganda niti pre hanip. Recommend ko to sa mga hindi pa naka basa nito. Sa filipino makaka relate kato agad hahaha. Add niyo to sa library ninyo at maaaliw kaayo sa pag basa. Yun lang salamat

i found the concept of the story interesting. it isnt like those cliche Apocalypse novel where mc returns back to past and eats the crystal found inside the head of a zombie( which people are totally fine to eat something that is inside the brain of a rotting, gross zombie. no hesitation at  all for cannibalism) to get stronger. the one major problem for this novel is grammar. along with several gramatical errors, the author used many words without even knowing the meaning of it which makes the whole sentence sound totally weird. i'd say just use simple words to write your story. correct and simple sentences are worth far more than sentences with fancy words that doesnt make any sense. and i would like to suggest that you edit your starting chapters. if your starting is bad then many people wont bother reading your novel and search for another one. i suggest using grammarly for solving gramatical errors.
overall id say the story is interesting but bad grammar puts it off. dropping it now( as of ch 6) but maybe will pick it up in future if the author polishes the starting chapters

It's a pretty good story and a proper though out the MC has a good system but doesn't make him OP in an instant only gives him a multitude of options to choose from, The MC doesn't get everything served in a platter but has to work for it, The plot is properly thought out and we'll developed with even proper world development and character design, the only problem being the update as I personally requested the author to write it on discord but he still didn't I wish he did but I guess he lost interest in the story, I will be honest it was the only good apocalypse novel I read after reading multiple of trash or Chinese xenophobic or stereotypical novels and I read it till the latest chapters, the story was well throughout and explored which made me interested in the story but sadly the author lost interest, I personally wouldn't mind being spoiled if the author in future plans to drop it, I will be more than grateful if you tell me the future development and plot and everything you were planning 'incase' you are going to drop it, That's all I wanted to say thank you

please get an editor, while i didnt see any spelling errors which makes me happy, the sentence structure is awful. also please check to make sure that you arent trying to make a wors that doesnt have a plural form into a plural word. preys should just be prey, i didnt see it but please dont use equipments just equipment, etc