Welp. since no one wants to give me a review. Read novel has many mysteries and hidden details so if you don't understand smth you'll most likely see and answer in a later chapter.I'll give a genuine review of my own novel when I'm above 100 chapters I guess.
Your story is interesting, great background and plot, i think your Mc is really nice too, yes, it has one and two grammatical errors, but that is normal, i expect to see more chaps and you did a great job overall amazing story.
Writing quality - 3 stars
No obvious grammar mistakes... but the vocabulary is lackluster and monotonous... sentence structure is poor because it feels like reading a diary
(also author repeats mc name almost every paragraph and it is annoying)
Update stability - 3 stars
I'm neutral
Story development - 3 stars
The pacing is good... events flow in a logical manner ... but there is no suspense, no mystery (story is too predictable and scenes are too lukewarm)
Character design - 2 stars
Characters are generic having atmost two traits with nothing more to them and only mc changes... but the mc's change is contrary to his personality
(mc will go from callous to wishy-washy to depressed to determined in a span of three paragraphs...he is more emo than sasuke)
World background - 2 star
Rarely is a place named... there is almost no description of places... the rest is just like the real world with no creativity
(there is no immersion when i can't mentally picture the setting)
It is an interesting read at first but it quickly loses its momentum... the protagonist is dull, the setting is hard to imagine and the plot is far too obvious
Good to read once in a while to pass time but otherwise...
I like the story so far great plot and not too cliche of a horror story beginning but it really helps and develops as our MC continues on and his squad
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No obvious grammar mistakes... but the vocabulary is lackluster and monotonous... sentence structure is poor because it feels like reading a diary
(also author repeats mc name almost every paragraph and it is annoying)
Update stability - 3 stars
I'm neutral
Story development - 3 stars
The pacing is good... events flow in a logical manner ... but there is no suspense, no mystery (story is too predictable and scenes are too lukewarm)
Character design - 2 stars
Characters are generic having atmost two traits with nothing more to them and only mc changes... but the mc's change is contrary to his personality
(mc will go from callous to wishy-washy to depressed to determined in a span of three paragraphs...he is more emo than sasuke)
World background - 2 star
Rarely is a place named... there is almost no description of places... the rest is just like the real world with no creativity
(there is no immersion when i can't mentally picture the setting)
It is an interesting read at first but it quickly loses its momentum... the protagonist is dull, the setting is hard to imagine and the plot is far too obvious
Good to read once in a while to pass time but otherwise...