Inside Abyss

"Oi" Luffy bent over and knocked on the windshield "I want to ask you something."

When I came to, I was flat upon the grassy floor. I could feel a warmth behind me. It was soft and fluffy. When I looked to my right I could see Ellinor keeping watch.

Zara I love you so much

"Stop doing that, Jessa babe." Tyson's voice sounded strangled. "We made a pact, no inappropriate thoughts of you. You're making it a little hard right now."

The crew began to rotate positions until each of the six pillars finally activated.

Thank you all for reading this book. This book is finally completed today. ❤️

well, I started it randomly but it was quite goodthough world background may seem somewhat lackingthe ability of mc is new and refreshingits definitely worth a read

I really love this story and I’d like you to continue on with this story and I encourage you to continue making great stories like this one but maybe work on the pacing of the story a bit for your next story.

I like the dynamics of the first chapter it’s a nice start just I feeling the prose and writing seems a bit bland and lack’s imagery. To should have on the pride to feel natural in the story and he will be good