Insect King (Dropped)

Good

Hey this is Brandon gould
I just read chapter 4 of Insect King and it is very interesting and I enjoyed it.

But I think if you expand on detail for your world like if you told me a little more about Maxazar's character and The Suprme Lord I just would not mind knowing what some of your people look like, and you could expand in detail on what the world will look lik as well

These are just suggestions I like your book as well as the feedback you give me I am giving you advice to help you

The unique idea with the great world building easily caught my attention and I hope that reader would be hooked as they read the opening chapters.



Doing great job author
Goodluck

Well this novel is new to me. The concept is really amazing. Reincarnation is not a new concept but reincarnated as an insect is surely new. This is really interesting. Keep up the good work.

Hi my name is Brandon gould I am responding to the review swap. I reviewed your book and I think it is a very good book and you should write more of it

Fantastic read. Writing quality can be improved further but other than that, plot is good. Reminds me of a video game story. Looking forward for more development of the story.