to translator: I hate when I am about to hug someone really sexy and my face hits the mirror.story: Our language is called the mother tongue because the father never gets a chance to Speak, that Is, very niceCharacter: When I joke they take it seriously. When I am serious they take as a joke..updatig stability: I don't know!world background: What kind of place is this? It's beautiful: Pigeons fly, women fall from the sky! I'm moving here!
Finally found this superb piece of work....I simply binge read 300 chapters for the first time hehehe...This is just amazing and definitely a novel worth reading on weekends😉😉
4th Review: (Chapter 510) Honestly, this is probably one of the best harem novels out there, the quality is impeccable, the story is well written and thought out, even up to the latest chapter, the author keeps writing some scenarios that captivates the reader to fully engross them to the story he wrote. The harem members actually have a personality that's not banal and blank. I also love the character development of the MC, to someone that doesn't feel love and only focuses on satiating his desire to someone that takes consideration of other people's feelings to finally, someone that feels love and reciprocates other people's feelings towards him. The romance is amazing in this, almost all of the girls have chemistry with the MC and their interactions are so cute. Overall I give this story a 9.7/10 and it's not even halfway done, so excited to see where this goes!
The tags say that the story is yuri, but as far as I have read the protagonist is a man, has anyone read the story? They know what gender it belongs to if it is yuri or not.
Writing quality is dull and boring. There's unneeded censoring, improper use of pronouns, and unappealing descriptions for skills and ****.Story development is terrible, it's going at a steady pace but the obvious plot armor is too blinding to look at. There is absolutely no balancing and stats along with skills are just randomly slapped down while the author thinks, "No one is going to bother to calculate anything, so it's fine. I'm a genius for making mobs so overpowered that a lot of people are in an endless loop of crippling their accounts."Character design.. Oh man, oh ****... Main character is trash for someone who has 7 years of experience while also running a guild/team/whatever you want to call it. I thought, "C-tier? Must of been really behind." But it's quite obvious that the main character is a fucking retard who made his way from sheer luck. Regarding NPCs and other players, their personality and appeal is just as worse as the main character; they're just really stale fluff to add onto the MC's sub-par design.World background. Almost non-existent. Locations names are just dropped down in text, there is no descriptions to build up on the scenery. "It's a cave. It's a forest. It's a road. It's a village." I wouldn't care if the main character was absolute trash if there was an actual world out there and not some **** that was thrown down on the spot without any details.Final verdict - Not even worth to read as a throwaway. And why the **** are you putting so much time into explaining the benefits of the beta when he's going to lose everything when the game officially launches? Please improve the world development, a story isn't a story without an actual world to it.
A pretty good start for the new novel looking promising.expecting new release......................................................................................................................................
Gimmicky piece of trash. It is already bad enough every urban story has a LoL segment where MC impresses a girl.... Now its the entire story. Absolute trash. Dont even bother reading.
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