SInce I've already read quite a decent amount of chapters, my opinions finally compelled in one. The book is good, no doubts — system is realized pretty well! Interesting to read, as well as the writing quality is fluent and easy-to-understand. I took the time to read some good systemic novels, so for people who love those genres, this is a gem.
Just trying to write a story and no story is perfect. Hope you enjoy it nonetheless and feel free to add feedback here or in the chapters! Been writing for a few years now but I still consider myself a newbie so go easy.
When I was reading this I kept feeling something was missing, and only until I reached the chapter where he talked to the general I realized what that was. I don't know our Mc, and I don't mean his backstory, I mean I don't know why he acts like he acts, I don't know why he does A instead of B, and he does so just cause. His evolution options seem absolutely nonsensical to me, because it's never established what type of person he is. And if the lens through which we see your world are dull then the world will inevitably be as dull as a well.
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I'm not too familiar with system novels bcz I haven't read a lot of them. I know they're currently mainstream but this one doesn't fall very short. I've read a few chapters now and I decided it's about time I gave a review on it.
Synopsis: Not bad. It's detailed enough to get the reader to understand what the book is about and it doesn't betray your expectations.
Writing Quality: This isn't bad but it isn't perfect either when it comes to grammar. The word choices are okay and it's fluent enough for anyone to read. However, I noticed a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and sometimes unnecessary wording. I know it can be difficult to get your English perfect because it is a tricky language but the grammar isn't bad by any means. It isn't perfect but it's FAR from unreadable. Good work.
Story Development: IMO, this isn't bad. As stated before, I haven't seen many system novels because they aren't exactly my cup of teaching (Apart from Solo leveling. That was fire
Read till chapter 5 till now, and I think the novel's pretty cool. The description of everything is good too however I would suggest to re-edit the initial chapters once again as there are a few grammatical mistakes. I know stats are important, but long complicated terms can make it slightly boring so I would suggest to reduce it if possible. Since there are some action scenes too, I feel the emotions could've been described better, rest everything is perfect and I wish you best of luck author.
Hmm MC has a system which shows him options for evolution. I mostly like emotionless systems because they are less annoying. It also show that mc will become op if he evolves steadily but he is not op from start which is good.
There are no grammar mistake.
The story is slow paced which is good for a apocalyptic plot ( from my perspective) .
if update is 1 chapter per day, it rise anticipation of the readers.
the story is descriptive enough.
It is overall a good novel needs a interaction of characters.
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Also for anyone who is checking the reviews…read this book…its a solid one.
Synopsis: Not bad. It's detailed enough to get the reader to understand what the book is about and it doesn't betray your expectations.
Writing Quality: This isn't bad but it isn't perfect either when it comes to grammar. The word choices are okay and it's fluent enough for anyone to read. However, I noticed a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and sometimes unnecessary wording. I know it can be difficult to get your English perfect because it is a tricky language but the grammar isn't bad by any means. It isn't perfect but it's FAR from unreadable. Good work.
Story Development: IMO, this isn't bad. As stated before, I haven't seen many system novels because they aren't exactly my cup of teaching (Apart from Solo leveling. That was fire
There are no grammar mistake.
The story is slow paced which is good for a apocalyptic plot ( from my perspective) .
if update is 1 chapter per day, it rise anticipation of the readers.
the story is descriptive enough.
It is overall a good novel needs a interaction of characters.