Infection

-Weapons: 30 points.

In the Lord's castle, Xara and the Lord had a big meeting in the hall. This time most of the soldiers, chosen officers and nobles were there. They explained what they need to do.

"Man," said Oliver. "That took forever!"

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

"Alright, my work is finished, now only one is missing. Yes! A name."

The premise is nice and interesting but the dialogue and how it's written sounds stiff and awkward. reminds me of AI stories but I'm not very certain about that. The author also tends to state the obvious and it's done over and over which makes the dialogues very awkward to read.Like there's this OP potion he's got and he says it's good if he uses it right but there might be greater rewards if he donates it? like bro you literally have a charity system that gives you 25x what you give out. why is this even a question?

Not that good                             

The story has a nice pacing to it. It starts with different povs and somewhat confuses the reader, but its a mystery so it's all good. It has a lot of potential and can be still improved. Hope the author continues updating more chapters.