It's a novel for bored readers, not for veterans, it's a novel for readers who want explicit scenes of R#18 with a completely na#ive and weak MC who was just lucky enough to have the divinity of the god of se#x and he only becomes strong at the end.
So, if you have free time and you want to have Lemon scenes, this novel is for you.
Hi, this is a honest review here.
Writing quality : 3/5
Update stability: 5/5
Story development : 4/5
character design : 3/5
World background: 4/5
The author is very passionate and love his work. However he is new to this. This book is atypical to ero books, with weak character designs- power mechanics and plots, but it is still a fun read. Sure around half the time the book is unrealistic and not immersive. But if you can treat this story as a pass time and not one of your favorites then, give this book a try.
IRTD is one of the hidden gems of this app. I would highly recomend this to any who like the fluffiness and live by the fluffiness. So far this story has progressed greatly and is by far one of the most enjoyable books within my library I can say the same for all of brother paranoids novels. Keep up the great work.
Story is great so far at sbout chapter 60 i seen a great improvement from the beginning reading becane alot easier only thing needed in this story is more R18 since its about a sex god it should be way more detail with more sex then just so they did it next...other wise its truly enjoyable to read keep it up more R18 if possible with details
Overall nice novel!
Writing Quality: 3/5. You should keep the consistency of your paragrafs more or less the same. I noticed that some times your paragrafs are soooo long. Try to keep them smaller for better reading. And try to separate dialogs from normal text so that thay are not so connected( sometimes it's hard to read because of that)
Updates: 5/5. ;)
Story: 5/5. The best part in my opinion.
Character: 4/5. Very good but You should take some time with Your characters. It feels a bit rushed.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
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So, if you have free time and you want to have Lemon scenes, this novel is for you.
Writing quality : 3/5
Update stability: 5/5
Story development : 4/5
character design : 3/5
World background: 4/5
The author is very passionate and love his work. However he is new to this. This book is atypical to ero books, with weak character designs- power mechanics and plots, but it is still a fun read. Sure around half the time the book is unrealistic and not immersive. But if you can treat this story as a pass time and not one of your favorites then, give this book a try.
Writing Quality: 3/5. You should keep the consistency of your paragrafs more or less the same. I noticed that some times your paragrafs are soooo long. Try to keep them smaller for better reading. And try to separate dialogs from normal text so that thay are not so connected( sometimes it's hard to read because of that)
Updates: 5/5. ;)
Story: 5/5. The best part in my opinion.
Character: 4/5. Very good but You should take some time with Your characters. It feels a bit rushed.
World: 5/5. Excellent in my opinion.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.