Concept of the story is amazing, the fact The MC is a hybrid got my attention, the story flow is smooth and understandable, embedding so mysteries and of course Romance
I recommend it for others to try out♥️♥️♥️
It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.
Marvellous story.... the plot is unique with the protagonist Kayden being a hybrid of two races I didn't think i would ever see.
The story flows smoothly, the characters are intriguing and the world building as well as English and Grammar paint a fantastical picture...
Fantastic story author, you have my vote!
Nice one! No grammar mistakes! loved to see more chapters and more 'action' with succumbs! and plot is also good! hoping MC 'smash' anna, it my selfish request!
Firstly, I feel the sense of character and personality of the Mc and Even side characters are well throughout, and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status.
And for the Second point, Although there weren't many chapter so far, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more withought giving the sense of boredom.
The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace.
the writing quality is top-notch, with no grammar errors.
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I recommend it for others to try out♥️♥️♥️
The story flows smoothly, the characters are intriguing and the world building as well as English and Grammar paint a fantastical picture...
Fantastic story author, you have my vote!
Firstly, I feel the sense of character and personality of the Mc and Even side characters are well throughout, and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status.
And for the Second point, Although there weren't many chapter so far, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more withought giving the sense of boredom.
The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace.
the writing quality is top-notch, with no grammar errors.
love reading this novel so far.