it's slightly above average to much back and forth over the same moments the flashbacks feel to drawn out, some grammatical errors but only a few that were annoyingly obvious (blaming the editor) sorry I'm an honest critic
Poor Jade. After all the lies she told Ashton, this stupid Mason wants to ruin it. I feel so sorry for her..... Please update two or three chapters daily, author. I'd really appreciate it.
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