It’s very good has a lot of Potential my only complaint I guess could be that it’s going a little way to fast pace and should kind of slow down and allow the mc to have a better development himself and the other characters. Also better description of the scenes would be awesome but overall great.
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Writing Quality 5/5
Stability of Updates 3/5
Story Development 5/5
Character Design 5/5
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Please try and pay attention to the tense of the words you use, some of your sentences are incomplete or too short. As well as some words are misspelled, but overall still understandable and thankfully your pronouns are good.
When did and why does Shiyuki have a crystal heart? I thought Shiroe was the only one to have one, because it was an experiment from that 'woman' that their grandmother gave permission for her to experiment with Shido?
Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!!!View More
I'll only sat this once but on the same day he wakes up not even 10 minets into it and he already starts raping his sister.And dident even care if he will die again.And coplains that he dosent want to go to that coprete orking hell he'll.But decided not to think rationally and to calm himself but to **** it and rape his suposed sister.He dident even think this is a new chance at life and I'll make the bomb shell of a sister mine but I need to know what's going on. Theres no of that. Only **** first think later.
In short I like it its one of the mature type stories I readied for past times
Its good by the way keep it up :) and thank you in advance for the updates :)
The "Incest Complex" is a compelling and thought-provoking read, weaving a complex tapestry of familial ties, psychological turmoil, and societal taboo. The protagonist's journey towards self-discovery is both haunting and relatable, as the blurred lines between love and forbidden desire keep readers on the edge of their seats. The author's nuanced exploration of human emotions adds depth to an intriguing narrative, making it a must-read for those who crave introspective storytelling.
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This novel is confusing me about the Taboo of Brothers and Mother
Writing Quality 5/5
Stability of Updates 3/5
Story Development 5/5
Character Design 5/5
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When did and why does Shiyuki have a crystal heart? I thought Shiroe was the only one to have one, because it was an experiment from that 'woman' that their grandmother gave permission for her to experiment with Shido?
Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!!!View More
Its good by the way keep it up :) and thank you in advance for the updates :)
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