Which is fair. There was just so much build with the kissing and then an almost childish version of everything else that it was impossible not to roll my eyes. It would have been better to simply gloss over those parts than to describe them that way.
I binged and read this all day and up until 3am. I was sucked in to an amazing story and just bad to go along for the ride. what an amazing story, your stories are amazing and this one was incredible!
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