In the Dark: UNDERBELLY

nice work keep going I'll just reviewing it

The story is written in the third person, and it gets annoying to read real quick.

Shameless author here 😂Writing a review for my own book is always a bit awkward, but hey, I’ll give it a shot. And if you have any questions about the novel or anything else, feel free to leave them in the comments!"So, what's this book about?"It’s about a guy named Lucard—also known as the Crimson King—who’s betrayed by his trusted disciple and the vampire council. After his brutal death, he’s reincarnated into the body of Draven Veyron, a powerless servant in a small vampire clan. Now, with his memories intact, Draven sets out on a path of vengeance, power, and… well, maybe a little redemption. If he survives the chaos, of course."What type of guy is Draven?"He’s a complex character—once a king, now a servant, and definitely not your typical hero. He’s got a chip on his shoulder (understandably), and while he’s consumed by revenge, there’s a deeper part of him questioning whether he’s doing the right thing. Oh, and he’s got a wicked sense of humor, too, in case you’re wondering."Will Draven be overpowered?"Draven’s definitely got some crazy powers, but he won’t be steamrolling through every battle. He’s strategic and cunning and often has to rely on his brains just as much as his brawn. It’s more of a slow burn—he gets stronger, but not without consequences and having to fight for every inch of power. Think of it like a high-stakes chess game with lots of dark magic."Is there romance?"There is, but it’s not the typical romance you might be expecting. It’s slow, complicated, and woven into Draven’s journey of self-discovery. You’ll see sparks, but don’t expect a fairy-tale love story. It’s more about betrayal, lost connections, and whether anyone can truly trust Draven in the long run."Will there be a harem?"Haha, no. There are definitely other characters, some of whom Draven might have complicated relationships with, but no harem. Draven focuses more on reclaiming his power and getting revenge than finding a bunch of romantic partners. But… we’ll see how things unfold 😉"How often do you update?"Currently, I aim for about a 7 chapters a week, but I’m trying to stay ahead of schedule. So, if everything goes well, you can expect more frequent updates!"Aren’t you a little full of yourself? You rated your book five stars?"Hey, what can I say? It’s a pretty amazing book! At least, I think so 😅 It’s one of my favorites, and honestly, writing this has been a wild ride. There’s always room for improvement, but I’m proud of it. Go ahead, check it out for yourself, and see if you agree! 😊

Fantastic first chapter, got me instantly hooked. You can really tell a lot of thought goes into the novel as worldbuilding was great. Writing style is definitely up my ally!Great job!

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interesting first chapter, characters seem fun and mc has potential