Immortal World System

  • Genre: Urban
  • Author: _Yuvi_
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Hilary Julian
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    I think everything is a bit fast and I love grammar so you understand next problem.
    The character explanation was fine but I like a little more details.
  1. Antony Walter
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    I like how the author made plot to tell the education related stuff, it's hilarious to me
  1. Yale Copperfield
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    i love itttt! because of the comedy as much as because of the adventure! im having a good time reading it! keep it up author! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
  1. Walter Raphael
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    Some parts are a bit chaotic and confusing. I also think the flow is too quick and the story needs more descriptions.However,the idea has potential.

    Keep it up!
  1. Armand Bruce
    Armand Bruce rated it
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    Good story. The main character a bit wishy washy. But I believe in character development. Hopefully he can become strong as soon as possible! Many typo. But its okay!!
  1. Michaelia Bessemer
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    Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
  1. Myra Bartholomew
    Myra Bartholomew rated it
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    Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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