great story so far
It also has a great sense of humour
I give 5 stars on all aspects besides updates.
pro tip for author sama
when beginning a novel you want to bind a lot of readers which like the novel so far to your story, no better way in achieving this than updating daily. (even if chapters will be a bit shorter this way)
If there arent lots of chapters already available and updates are slow, lots of people dont bother with your novel
I wanted to write a fun, cultivation world novel while using the usual cliches and tropes of the genre in my own way. This is not your typical cultivation novel, and I hope you enjoy this.
This novel is based on the fun adventures of a reborn disciple from Earth and Immortal Master who lacks social skills.
Planning to update 1/day. I want to write slightly long chapters and hence it's hard for multiple releases. I am thinking of breaking down long chapters to 2 for the first week.
I know I am not great at writing, and I forget even the basic grammar rules. But I really want to tell stories.
So if you find errors or have suggestions, please feel free to comment.
This is my entry for WPC #108.
I do realize the works that I am a horrible editor of my own work. So, if I end up missing anything, I will try to go back and edit those past chapters after a certain number of chapters get released.
Looking forward to building this novel with you all and learning from it.
Still why I give this a 5* rating? Because I am shameless and this is my own novel xd.
This novel is fresh and AWESOME!!!!!
I hope it continues to be........................................................................
And please, pleaseeeee
DON'T DROP.
Loving the story so far. Can’t wait for him to go into the outside world and show his master how it has changed since his time. Also liked how his cultivation method is like a rubber band ball or a yarn ball can’t wait for him to learn more. Overall a good story if a bit slow right now.
An amusing and truely well written story set in a transmigrator/cultivation setting.
The characters are somewhat unconventional (or refreshingly non-cliché), there is at least one absolutely adorable beast; world building and the character backgrounds are well paced, as well as intriguingly written, resulting in this novel being (at least in my personal opinion) an absolute gem to read and enjoy
My King's new work...
A unique cultivation novel with a unique style with some great funny moments.
What I liked the most was the style the author wrote when writing dark moments.
You may feel those dark scenes as funny. Dark and funny together at the same time. (Especially the beginning)
The pace is a little slow but gets more character dev.
Let me tell you how much fun this story is! It's entertaining! Excited to read more~
I've heard of numerous cultivation stories, but this one has its uniqueness that creates an entertaining tale. The first chapter got me hooked! It has vivid story telling!
This is a diamond! A bit in the rough, but definitely has its merits! :D
I feel like this story is a good one for many reasons. The first reason being the writing quality as well as the story and the characters.
I find the MEEP a really fun character that I hope to see in almost every chapter. I also like how well the characters are described, and frankly like the prose in the story quite a lot.
The author seems really good at descriptions and also at characters judging his dialog and the quality of his work. Feels like reading a real translation, but a bit higher quality grammar wise.
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It also has a great sense of humour
I give 5 stars on all aspects besides updates.
pro tip for author sama
when beginning a novel you want to bind a lot of readers which like the novel so far to your story, no better way in achieving this than updating daily. (even if chapters will be a bit shorter this way)
If there arent lots of chapters already available and updates are slow, lots of people dont bother with your novel
This novel is based on the fun adventures of a reborn disciple from Earth and Immortal Master who lacks social skills.
Planning to update 1/day. I want to write slightly long chapters and hence it's hard for multiple releases. I am thinking of breaking down long chapters to 2 for the first week.
I know I am not great at writing, and I forget even the basic grammar rules. But I really want to tell stories.
So if you find errors or have suggestions, please feel free to comment.
This is my entry for WPC #108.
I do realize the works that I am a horrible editor of my own work. So, if I end up missing anything, I will try to go back and edit those past chapters after a certain number of chapters get released.
Looking forward to building this novel with you all and learning from it.
Still why I give this a 5* rating? Because I am shameless and this is my own novel xd.
I hope it continues to be........................................................................
And please, pleaseeeee
DON'T DROP.
The characters are somewhat unconventional (or refreshingly non-cliché), there is at least one absolutely adorable beast; world building and the character backgrounds are well paced, as well as intriguingly written, resulting in this novel being (at least in my personal opinion) an absolute gem to read and enjoy
A unique cultivation novel with a unique style with some great funny moments.
What I liked the most was the style the author wrote when writing dark moments.
You may feel those dark scenes as funny. Dark and funny together at the same time. (Especially the beginning)
The pace is a little slow but gets more character dev.
I've heard of numerous cultivation stories, but this one has its uniqueness that creates an entertaining tale. The first chapter got me hooked! It has vivid story telling!
This is a diamond! A bit in the rough, but definitely has its merits! :D
I feel like this story is a good one for many reasons. The first reason being the writing quality as well as the story and the characters.
I find the MEEP a really fun character that I hope to see in almost every chapter. I also like how well the characters are described, and frankly like the prose in the story quite a lot.
The author seems really good at descriptions and also at characters judging his dialog and the quality of his work. Feels like reading a real translation, but a bit higher quality grammar wise.