Immaculate Spirit

i absolutly love this novel!!!!
one of my all time favorite mc, great story, great interactions with other characters and really interesting side characters!
I need more chapters ASAP

This could easily be in the top 20 on this site if it had an editor. The plot is well formed, as far as I have read, and the characters are interesting. Still, English is obviously not the first language of the author. There are a significant amount of extremely common mistakes such as using the wrong words, getting plurals wrong, incorrect sentence structures, missing words, missing commas, run on sentences, incorrect tense, etc...

It also doesn't help that the cover implies some sort of multiple personality story and synopsis doesn't really explain anything. Overall this is a good read assuming you can ignore the quality of the prose itself.

Take your time with the story and don't rush it. I've seen many a novel where the author felt pressured by his readers to quicken the pace and ended up being dissatisfied with the way it turned out. I would hate to see this novel get dropped or enter hiatus.

psdta :  GOOD NOVEL =)

Damn bro. Nicely written. Wow. Marvelous. I like it. 5 stars for you. Goodluck for this project, please more update. Here stones for you. .......................

The amazing story of a mischievous teenager dealing with the corrupted world.
You may need to change the description to fit the Superstar/CIA/Laws aspect of the novel, it's not really inspiring right now
So far i'm loving it, Keep going !

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