I'm Too Tired of Being OP, So I decided to Live a Carefree Life [BL]

The background info is too much. Most of it gets straight pass by my head. I would suggest to add background info only when needed. Do not preset it.
For example, when MC comes across a beast then please do describe it. Don't give all classification of different beasts beforehand.
Please...

The story is quite heavy handed with descriptive information. I do like the storyline and characters, but I sometimes get lost in certain break down info. Not much in the way of smut it's a good and a bad thing.

This is a first-person storytelling which is interesting because most of the main character's thoughts are not hidden. I just feel like the main character will get many obstacles to achieve a 'carefree life'. My condolences. *Warning. Prepare for the test of your IQ to consume all of the info! *

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This was worth reading. The ML are litlle bit OP. And it is BL. Well I did read only the 19 chapters that are there. There is nothing graphic in them. There is a lot of world background descriptions. That was anoying.