I'm Tired of Transmigrating but He's still Obsessed with Me

"Please behave yourself Saya" - said Souichiro.

Leto sat down cross-legged in front of the old man, appearing at ease. In truth, he didn't dare let his guard down.

Only shooting stars break the mold

"Young master, what's your wish."

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

I could use a little fuel myself

night was quite peaceful only demonic beasts roars could be heard .

Before we go on. There are several levels of humans.

Characters and setting seem to be well fleshed out,though with odd, somewhat justifable hiccups. Power scaking and growth of the mc is acceptable. What really kills the story is the writers habit to either ramble on in a circle and often repeat information. Perhaps in later chapters the writer will learn to right more fluidly, I, unfortunately will not be there to read it. This work does not deserve a ranking spot on the golden ticket list.

That's a great way to start a book. Fill the first chapters with lots of intense scenes. I really got interested in this book. Definitely adding it to my collection. Good work Author.

Grata start so far of Alice story waiting to see what happens between her and jermin

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?