This story has more potential than it is utilizing. It's a great concept but nothing is being developed. what the system is capable of and why he is devoting effort to it isn't properly explained. Mind you this is a review only based on content I currently have available to me. It jumps into simulations that he has 0 input on for the most part with seemingly random exceptions. The growth of the world is not explained well and might as well be jibberish with little to no real breakdown in the evolution of the world. This is not a review about this being a bad novel even though it sounds that way it has potential but was taken out of the oven to soon and is still a little raw.
Ooo I love a good mage book and this one seems interesting, I want to see what else the author does with this world. the story looks promising so you should defiantly check it out
I can't speak to the characters or the story. It seems to be a rehash of weak to strong reincarnater with broken off engagement. I say seems to be, because a machine translation may be more readable. How this got approved for release is bewildering. The site managers should review these better and insist on readable and understandable translations.
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