I'm the Immortal Business Tycoon

I want to try this two...

Maybe this is also good?

I'm ****ting here. haha

Expected more from this.

Great concept , but destroyed by author by his style of writing.which gave me serious headache.

The word handsome and ,and first person view of MC with disastrous greatly flawed mind and mentality is fucking point of this novel.


Sorry author not for me. Reading this giving me head ache.

Honestly, when webnovel recommended this story to me, I was surprised that it had so few views, since it's concept is very good, however, after reading a few chapters I understood the problem, I couldn't read forward, boring protagonist, laughing like a stupid all the time, unbearable developments and views to keep me reading. Too bad that such a good concept is being wasted like that. I don't know if these problems improve in the later chapters, but I don't want to waste my time to find out.

I don't think that your this funny.  Hahaa.. I feel the vibe of someone from you bro...

And you Tales if Existence was also good.

I advice a little improvement from the grammars.. then it would be a perfect masterpiece!

I'm impressed with the concept. The story changes. From chapter 1-40 the MC is really....Umm he is not worthy?

But author changes it.

thank you and more chapters to come.

I can barely understand it.

Interesting idea and all but the writing quality is so poor it's absolutely unreadable. It's a shame really.




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No one is talking. Haha.. I'm bored.