very interesting writer...pls keep posting.....some people reading should at least comments on this novel to encourage our writer. she should know your thought about this novel I. ......
Be prepared for gender bender, Early warning. It's a great concept for me until all pretense is dropped a goes full female and changes tune from evolution novel to cultivation.
So many unnecessary words.The grammar is terrible, the plot itself makes no sense, the main character is just extremely unlikeable, and the author can’t seem to stop saying things that don’t even need to be said.I mean, Jesus. If the main character makes toast, the author would give an extremely detailed explanation as if babies are reading this. The author is clearly trying to seem smart, wise, and philosophical, but it comes off as annoying, especially when it completely breaks the immersion.One second, the main character will be having a conversation, and in the next second, he’ll start talking to himself for half of the chapter just to come to a single conclusion.
Shameless Author here rating it 5 stars~~ALSO TO GRAB YOUR ATTENTION AND READ THIS:This is an interactive novel based on my original book World Gate Online in the past. Interactive meaning you, as the reader, get to choose the path our MC will take!At the end of the chapter is a list of choices. All you need to do is to do a PARAGRAPH COMMENT on your choice which I will count. Only 1 account can vote for 1 choice. If I see 1 account vote on 2 different choices, all his votes are not counted.By the time I write the next chapter, I will start counting and write the verdict on the next chapter.Also, this novel is up in Scribblehub which has a poll function so I'm going to add the two sites' total count for the choice. Feel free to also vote in SH...not like I can stop it...*If it gets too hard to count votes here, I'm gonna stop posting on this site and just focus on SH XD
Just the title of the book got me all excited! I really adore the separate pov's. The characters are so strong and influencing. Keep up the good work!!
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