I'm An Incubus: Black Blood [In Editing]

I deleted my past review, this would have been one of my favourites if not for the really horrible grammar that really makes my eyes hurt. if you can improve on the grammar it would be awesome

besides the switch personality of the MC, i really like when the MC is sociopathic and partially insane, I also love the story its one of the best ones I've seen on this website even tho the grammer may be bad somtimes, also the two authors are kind and wholesome people so please don't drop this you two.

Shamless review from Co-Author
- the grammer may be...debatable but I think the over all world and overall story is grate, and just a little note, the first 100 chapters is only the beginning and its him just messing around and having fun in a way while both me and Eve(Author) find ways to torture the Mc for fun, but after that it gets more serious and detailed in a way that you wouldn't of expected from us,
so consider reading are completely free novel and we hope you enjoy...also Eve is garbage at Grammer so thats were I come in as the Co-author/editor and also main character plus system Ai.

hope you enjoy

- from Co-author Jonathan

left this novel for like 3 months and now there's 4 volumes, im pretty excited to see what y'all be cooking up on here, keep up the hard work and quit slacking!

Hey!

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1st you owe me a cookie,
2nd I really enjoyed this novel and neko is bae!
3rd I officially challenge you to a battle of authors, me vs you and you have one month to prepare!

A ton of grammar mistakes, remember use apostrophe, clause, and etc. Like, the "ill" one instead of "I'll" I could mistaken as ill as in "sick". Please use proper capitalization.

Please come back! t~t
I’ve just finished reading up to the latest chapter, and I  love this novel so much. I don’t understand how this one has fallen off of so many people’s radar. Please keep writing! I will support! [img=update]