Read all available chapters and so far the novel is good, not amaizing but still good. I have few problems with the novel:1. World Background (so far): 1.1 This is my personal opinion but there are only 2 nations (factions as author calls them). One is on our continent the other on the enemy continent and that's it. For me that's close to nothing. There is Bronzewood ( or something like that) where MC comes from, there is village/town/city i forgot the name of because it was included in like 2 chapters, and then there is Godhaven (capital). Not only is the whole continent a single country, but is seems that even that country is small. MC reached the capital in like 2 hours or so from his godforsaken farm.2. Story Development (so far): 2.1 This is my personal opinion (again), for me the development is too slow. Maybe that's authors' idea and it might pick up speed in later chapters, but still for 36 chapters he found out very little and basic information about the world he is in and travevled to Godhaven (capital city). His first mission was to capture demon in 48 hours and there are still more than 20 hours left, meaning 36 chapters descirbe only 20-30 hours. 2.2 The other think for me is that battles are too basic, there is only 1 skill that demon can use (I know thats only for now but still...) and demons from same species alway have the same abilities. You (author) could have put Mutation where the demon/pet mutates and gains diffrent skills, there are other ideas but you get the point - more uniqueness.3. Character Design (so far): 3.1 This is my personal opinion (AGAIN), the character is too rash on making decisions, especially about rescuing the princess. Did he fall for her already? I know he says something about not being a 'Coward', but in my opinon that's whole diffrent level of 'Bravery' bordering 'Stupidity' and 'Simping' . That's just the begining so he may evolve, but that;s what i saw up until now. That's pretty much it all my ranting. Its still good, but yea.. P.S. Good luck with the novel author.
Hello, Wolfy here.Most of the reviews are mostly true. About the start of the stroy anyway. The novel is HUGE, what I've done is just a glimpse of an iceberg. Kindly jump to the back a bit, you may find something that is "not so boring". The author didn't write a novel with 20+ million word count while boasting about the MC from start to end.Annnd sorry for the slow speed. As said, I'm not a contracted translator! The spare time I can spend on this voluntary work is really limited.Regards.
O would like to mention that the son of Chandragupta Maurya and father of Ashoka Samrat was not so well known... His predecessor and successor were a bit too outstanding....... Ty
From the start the story is memorable and easy to get sucked into. It's also very original compared to other novels on this platform, which is big plus not only to me but a lot of readers out there wanting something new to read.
I gonna be honest here after reading first 200 chapters. The forced tragedy for a guy who on earth before his reincarnation was top tier in a mafia family but somehow and some weird reason he decided not to use that prior knowledge to get his situation better from the beginning? This is honestly dumb as f*** development not sure how this is ranked as high on the story dev side of things when it's all forced bs
It was a lot to accept, but I had to. Echidna had no reason to lie about such thing, thus I swallowed again. My mind was racing at an extremely fast pace, and I couldn't even control my train of thought, until suddenly, my messy thoughts were all disturbed by the clap of hands.
Im voting 5 stars on everything because even though I have yet to read the novel itself, LonelyTree and his editor, Millman are some of the most hard working people I've come to know in the webnovel community (in fact, Tree is a borderline workaholic. He spends most of his time in his basement typing away at his keyboard from sunrise to sunset, all day everyday. In in fact, MillTree has worked on a number of translations before this one, so I definitely recommend checking out their previous and/or ongoing projects!). Secondly, it seems like our FL is someone who's a genetically mutated hermaphrodite but is really a girl in her consciousness? Anyways, I can't wait to read all about this romantic comedy and will be diligently voting for it to be out of the queue. Cheers!
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