It's too draggy but interesting, I love how the ml love the twins but it's focused too much on the twins. The pace is too slow, I hope the author also focussed on the surroundings not only to the twins and the ml. Though I like it, since I like kids.
Thank you for dropping by! This project is an attempt at writing in a fresh new style that is different from my other projects. I am so excited to share it with you guys and I hope you will like it! If you do, please leave me a nice review, and if there's anything you find that can be improved on, do drop a comment as well to let me know your thoughts. As always, thank you for your support! ♥
Liked the free chapters, it’s worth a read i guess. It’s not something unique, but it feels like author has put some thought behind the novel, and didn’t just go “let’s write a dungeon novel” well that’s what I feel. And I think that it makes a difference.Also good job coldtir0. And good luck for the future.
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