I Want Your Body Not Your Heart

...But as of yet, they had found nothing.

Oh yeah, it was my sister who was his doctor.

Great story so far, it's not perfect but there's so much potential.Good job ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓ 5🌟

eu conectei minha conta só para comentar. a historia é muito boa. gosto de como tem capitulo todos os dias. o enredo e bom e mesmo com o prazo todos capitulos são criativos, os personagens são bem unicos cada um é diferente do outro mostrando diversidade, alem da hiatoria de fundo que e muito bem estruturada ate agora nunca encontrei um buraco na trama. embora tenha alguns pontos que parecam buraco foram explicados em capitulos futuros de forma bem detalhada. gosto do grau de violencia e sexualidade nos capitulos que tem. e por fim acho que tenho grande animação em dizer Que Pandora é um pronagonista bem interessante,embora os primeiros 4 capitulos comecem bem cliche depois muda totalmente se tornando unico, a Pandora e o tipo de protagonista que muitos procuram e é super raro aparecer,uma protagonista com o toque certo de obcessão e loucura, que é sanguinaria e fofa, que é esperta mais nada em nivel absurdo para deixar tudo facil, alem de ser uma obra onde ela realmente vai crescendo aos poucos ao inves de ter o poder de mão beijada. adoraria se tivesse tradução para PT Br

The background is good and it makes more sense than most novels you see, but it has been a while since I‘ve seen a MC this dumb and ungrateful. He gets a system that generates items so high wuality that they’ve never existed, and not only does he take it for granted, he constantly complains about how it doesn’t do anything for him. Without it he’d probably be dead in a ditch because he was pretentious with some gang boss or something, with it he’ll probably be dead I   Ditch because he was pretentious with the leader of a country. Great potential, but the MC is such a dimbass that it ruins the whole thing.

my brother  good writing nice thoughts deep words used man ✨✨

not bad.                                                                                                                                            .

The beginning of the novel is absolutely excellent and filled with excitement, keeping you eager to see what happens next. The author's storytelling style is outstanding, with a strong ability to explain things without making it feel boring. The descriptions are vivid and captivating, making you visualize the events as if you're inside the story. I'm really excited to continue and see how the plot unfolds

I think this book format suits well in RR or other websites because WN prefers to be shorter in word counts so I was pretty surprised how long it was, some may be a slug to go through and the description can be overexplained sometimes but overall the story is there, while nothing original and all but it had a unique flair to it.Decent start