“Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes.”
TO ALL MY READERS! I LOVE YOU! YOU'RE AMAZING AND I WANNA SMOOCH YOU ON THE MOUTH! ok maybe not.. BUT I MIGHT! JUST YOU WAIT! I'M GONNA KEEP WRITING K BYEE
5 chapters in and it's already amazing. I came for the yanderes but it's way much more than just that. It has an actual story and doesn't just focus on the characters. Amazing read overall
haven’ even read it but i saw yandere so already 5 star but is there actually any yandere, just looking at the chapter tittles i don’t see any signs of yanderes
Writing quality is amazing and though he will never correct anything he generally won't have to.
Story Development is okay. Certain things I question (Ashly being one of them.) While others are quite well done (Emma and sky.)
Character design. Lemme just say. Ashly makes me want to have her grow some balls so I can put them under a hydraulic press. Everyone else is well done. Although mc can feel a little bland sometimes. The actual designs are cool such as water hair in the newer chps.
Updates come pretty fast. This might be my last post here if I can't keep up.
World is still in need of building. But it feels a little bland and mundane. Nothing super new here.
Overall a good novel. World building is a bit weak but the characters are compelling. **** Ashly though.
I read up to chapter 50 (the paywall) and it's really good so far I really want to read more but cannot justify spending that type of money on webnovel. so I guess I'm dropping here. I recommend this if you have the 20 something dollars to buy the rest of it.
Rushed. Thats the biggest probelm. MC gets everything handet to him at the Start. SSS+ abilty, all the girls and huge plot armor. The characters all feel bland and there is literally no world building what so ever. Dropped at chapter 80.
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Story Development is okay. Certain things I question (Ashly being one of them.) While others are quite well done (Emma and sky.)
Character design. Lemme just say. Ashly makes me want to have her grow some balls so I can put them under a hydraulic press. Everyone else is well done. Although mc can feel a little bland sometimes. The actual designs are cool such as water hair in the newer chps.
Updates come pretty fast. This might be my last post here if I can't keep up.
World is still in need of building. But it feels a little bland and mundane. Nothing super new here.
Overall a good novel. World building is a bit weak but the characters are compelling. **** Ashly though.