I transmigrated as the Female Leader, but I want to marry the villain!

The story and characters are great! BUT the grammar is a big OOF!! You need to get an editor or hire a new one because there are a ton of errors that ruin the flow of the story. Work hard and don't give up!

I like reading this... the only problem I have is the spelling errors and the wrong pronouns used to describe the genders at times, he became she and etc. But I like where this story is going! Please update soon!

Well...I don't know what to say other than this story is a grammatical nightmare. It's just...sigh. The premise is beautiful and I guess you can ignore the errors if you like it enough but...well. You really should work on your pronouns in particular. Just to clarify, for a woman is used /she/ and for a male /he/. Always. No exchange between the two can occour. Not only that, you also fill the chapters with unneeded info, throwing up facts left and right, making it a boring read. Is the reason why I only gave you 3 stars for world background. It's not that you did not develop it, it's just that...you didn't really fit it very well in the story. You should try to integrate your info more with the flow of the story, revealing smaller bits in more points. There is no need to dump everything on the readers at once, it only stops the flow and few people will read those added parts anyway (like i did) which is a pity.
Aside from those points it's a beautiful story, I liked it. You probably should just think more about editing your chapters rather than postin them quicker, really.
Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you with my comments and that instead they could be of some help to improve your writing style.

A very good read, this has a very good and well thought world background and plot. Even though there are some grammatical mistakes author seems to be improving. Currently loving this work hope it continues stably. Thanks for the author for your hard work.

Love this story so far! I started the book and binge-read up to the currently last chapter 25, 'cause I always wanted to know what happens next. It's a story that absolutely captures you with a lot of surprising twist in the plot.
Sometimes I'm worried that our MC gets silly, but luckily she's still capable.

Overall, love the idea but room for improvement.
Great story, quirky charakters and a light, fun reading. Grammer errors here and there but it doesn't affect the understanding.
Some chapters feel like going too fast...how to say, tmi, it just feels as if you get a bunch of things tossed at you, when it could have been paced slower, with more love for smaller details in it to feel the atmosphere without having to focus on a bunch of other equally important and interesting happenings. ATM at chapter 21

Having fun reading this. A few mistakes in grammar and quite a few situations where he/she have been switched by mistake.

A bit too much info dump in every other chapter though. Exposing this much information needs to be done more sparingly.

Love the characters but that system is making my head hurt. Story progression is hurting a bit from the constant irrational sidekick.