Spencer didn't mind helping out Mike and his dad. He had known Mike for years and had been over to his house enough where he was basically part of the family. He wouldn't take any pay, just go and help for a while. A little bit of exercise would never hurt and the weather was still cool enough where it wouldn't be obnoxious to work in.
Yoorin also has another House, in the House of Yoorin was in Fukui and Yoorin have a place to live Apartment in Osaka while May have a longer other than Apartment in Osaka in Hiroshima, he also has an Apartment there.
The fighting scenes are so well explained it was surreal, I like how he explained the expression the way he stabed and his system is well defined including penalties. the world building is also good it was good read for me I hope author dwell more on character building and continue it..
Let me go over one by one.Writing Quality had become great. I read and reviewed one of the author's previous books and from there, his writing quality has jumped way higher. There are no Grammer mistakes, at least none I could catch. There is a bit too much exposition sometimes, like explaining the customs of the land and their significance along with describing the reactions of the supporting main leads a bit too extensively. The first is needed in all respects lest the readers feel alienated but the latter could have been toned down just a bit, but that's just my opinion.Story Development so far is great. The author really catches your attention and doesn't let go. me, personally, I didn't like the addition of the harem from Greek mythology but that's just my personal preference. I do feel that it was revealed too soon, but then again, revealing it too late might have led to the readers growing attached to Draupadi only.Characters are all dynamic and serve their own purpose. Especially the character of Krishna was so beautifully added. I do have some bias about the way the author underlines the Dynamic between the Kauravas and the Pandavas though. In a lot of literary and TV media, you always see the authors or the directors take a side and support a particular group and the author does the same and supports the Kauravas. But there stands to reason that no one in the Mahabharata is actually a good character. They're certainly not bad as they are followers of Dharma, but they are evil in a way that does not violate the Dharma of that age and that has been beautifully underlined in the original Epic. But then again, these are all creative choices and the author writes the characters beautifully.Update Stablility is great.World Background instantly gets a five star since the work it's trying to adapt is so expansive and complex by itself. it can make way for a lot of interesting philosophical and narrative moments. and the existence of other myths only aids to that.Wish you well author! keep writing!
This is going to have a lot of story and not just fights like in every other action novel, where only fights take place for viewer attraction, the story will have increasing beauty, and has a lot of inspiration taken from previous fantasy stories and has a lot of stuff, world building, characters with backstories, mysteries, jolly characters, darkness of the world, technology and dragons together, a mixture of eras, to have everything. Good chapter length, extra information, etc. Way to go for a Shonen Anime.
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