I Screwed the Novel's Plot

  • Genre: Fantasy
  • Author: Admirably_
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.8 / 5.0, 13 votes)
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  1. Merlin Ralph
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    Hello, I‘m the author of this novel. I‘d like suggest. If you want to leave a review, pls include the last chapter you read, so others can see where your opinion is coming from. Thank you.
  1. Afra George
    Afra George rated it
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    I don't usually write reviews because I don't know how to make one and have bad grammar, so I'll just write my opinion.


    I like the story and the MC, he's pretty unique on a different way. The story is quite slow phased but I like it that why, it makes the world building more detailed.

    You might sometimes be annoyed at the MC because he's not using his brain sometimes and a little bit childish, well for me it one of his good points, it made him different from the other MCs with edgy personality.

    This novel is definitely a gem, I can't wait it to be popular so it can have stable update and many chapters.

    Btw Author Luv U~♪
  1. Salome Law
    Salome Law rated it
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    No comments, this story is a recommendation for those of you who like family stories (especially brotherlove(?) ahem, cough-cough
  1. Stephanie Burns
    Stephanie Burns rated it
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    I'm short of words right now. The only thing I can say is, I recommend this novel to everyone. This novel is quite intriguing.
  1. Cheryl Spender
    Cheryl Spender rated it
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    4 stars for everything but character 2 stars. Stopped reading at the end of chapter 8. Anyone who reincarnates would know manipulating magic is op than conjuring magic. Not only that did mc forget his education mc had? MC is careless, forgetful, an really gives me the image that mc isn't a reincarnated with the way mc doesn't use his knowledge in any way. Besides mc everything else is great.
  1. Les Hudson
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    I really admire your work author.The story is so intresting and i am eager to find out what happens next.Keep up the good work...Best wishes
  1. Lionel Eveline
    Lionel Eveline rated it
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    Author, plz dont drop this novel. It has a very good potential, and you just need to reach for it. We are all eagerly supporting your novel and patiently awaiting your next entry....
  1. Wanda Raymond
    Wanda Raymond rated it
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    at chapter 45 and I think it is a good read, the premise is common but the characters are intriguing.
    but I think the author made the MC too OP while lacking much life experience from any of his two lives which just leaves him not knowing what to do with his power and leaves the mc in a very passive state to the plot. there are reasons for his naivety, from his previous life his old habits carried on but the fact that he doesn't seem to be learning or progressing as a character and the way his behavior doesn't really match his  actual age is a bit off putting. but I believe there's still a long way to go and the author seems to have lots of ideas in store for this novel
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