First, the world of mc is not earth, the world of mc is a world where 90% of the territory belongs to dangerous monsters.when her arm was attacked by a foreign creature or object causing pain and temporary loss of consciousness instead of consulting a specialist or doctor, she chose to go back to her private apartment to have her checked in person.hey dude, you're not a martial arts expert who has the expertise to identify monsters or other suspicious objects, you're just an ordinary human. Your logic is problematic, it doesn't match the environment you live in.the plot is too forced, if mc's logic is that stupid, even without the disease he suffers, he will still have a short life.
The book ends at chapter 337, but is dropped, not completed. It was a waste of time reading, and webnovel should have the status say dropped instead of completed. Thankfully, it is easy to find these novels elsewhere so I will never have to pay for an unfinished novel labeled completed again.
Translation quality - it's good. A few typos here and there but meh.Stability of updates - well it's a trial read and not a chosen novel sooooostory development - Doesn't seem to have much of a story tbh. The power scaling sucks, there isn't really any end goal or drive. Not only that but the mc practically relies on borrowed power the entire novel.The mcs of the worlds he goes to suddenly have cliched 'halo effects' that make them immune to the mc trying to hurt them. For example the mc tried to have the mc of the 'edge of tomorrow' film get injured so he'd get a blood transfusion so the mc could proceed with his plan, but somehow some bs would always happen that stops this. The car flips over, the machinery breaks down, a gust of wind. It was all very forced.Not only that but the author never describes his process of becoming stronger in terms of stats. It seems he just trains by running around? He goes to different worlds gets missions and does stuff but from what's been stated it seems his main mission worlds only give him dimensional points to buy soul stones which brings us back to the whole borrowed power thing. He apparently can take 1 of the skills from the soul stone once it's used up but at the end of the day it's still borrowed power.Character design - I honestly can't remember anything that sticks out about any character and I've literally just stopped reading.World Background - The mc takes over the body of someone who is supposedly an exposed cultist. The mc deals with this pretty quickly and ends up joining the organisation that was hunting him down because they don't know he's the same person. We're quickly introduced to various countries and organisations that have no substance to them. It seems we have a camp of chaos for no other reason than they like chaos, a camp of order cos well humans like order, and a camp of edgy teens that want everyone to die for no other reason than they get it up for death. The world lacks substance and the power scaling is extremely bad.TLDR: - mc relies on borrowed power- poor world background (has no substance)- there's no goal or end game- the author skims over the worlds a lot it's very barebones- characters aren't memorable- cliched halo effectsP.S. People keep comparing it to custom made demon king but that's an insult to that novel.I don't think I'm missing anything from this tldr but if I did the rest of the review should speak for itself.
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