I moved back to country side

Loved reading it will be waiting for the 2nd Chapter keenly …superbly written  very well expressed, suspense on each line of the story overall a beautifully thought story

I like the way you wrote it, it's very clear and easy to understand. after all this novel is promising story. I love the characters and looking forward to them. keep it up!

The book is only just started and one can easy relate with it already. A beautiful plot all together that will get you interest and eager to read more. Great job Author!

Tho I see some space for improving, This story never fails to give you the feeling of comfort, and the bitter truth of life. Each chapter ends with a hope, and that makes it all more better.

That was a simple, subtle but very interesting piece of work. looking forward to reading more.  

I loved the simple language use which still had the capacity to lure me in.

The words and sentences are written are clear and understandable. The story itself carries out a well-developed plot that arouses the curiosity of the readers.
It feels really good to read a story like this.
and after a long while, I feel like I want a spoiler about what's going to happen next.
I cant wait to see the next chapter.
Author, you are so talented. please write more and more in the future.

This is a really nice story. I liked the beginning and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters! Author, please keep going and give us your best!

I like how the author manage the flow of the chapters. Nicely work keep writing stories I'll root for youuuuu good luck  love your story keep it up [img=recommend]