I can look past not being OP, I usually prefer not OP MC and actually train and persevere to gain power. But yeah other than that. "Oh Brother! THIS GUY SUCKS!"
Your book is very nice. Very well written, all your lines are in place and your grammar is exceptional. Your characters are amazing too. I can always already see a romance brewing. Lol. I'm an author like you and I would be lying if I said I haven't learned a thing or two from your book.
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