I had the Saintess Executed, now she’s the Demon Queen and I’m her Toy

Hey All. Author here. If you have any constructive Criticism  about the story so far. I would love to hear it. I still wish to improve a lot on writing .

also any question feel free to sound off. I'll try to answer those as best as I can in this very earlier stage of the story thus far.

Welp. back to writing I go!

What an interesting story

I like the series and story. I will say though it’s getting slow and tiresome with the short updates and then the wait for your comments to be met! Sigh starting to drag the story some