it was a good read. the mc is not ungrateful to his family and loves them. he is a young master but not the typical, has a good sense of humour and certainly is not a puss
It's not the most unique concept but it executes it well enough to be an interesting read. The backstory as to why the game matters is a bit out of left field and probably doesn't make sense if you think about it which is why I don't.
Amazing work or art. This story is one that extend a hand of love to the children of the world, it teaches them how to be strong.. Its thematic focus is one the word needs. I hope this story gets celebrated by the world.. Keep it up dear writer
This your author, sorry for not writing for a long since I felt that I made the MC too OP. Everytime I write, I get confused in the status numbers as there are too many and needed to be accurately calculated but I tried to minimize it as I can. Sometimes I can't make of a single sentence due to focusing too much on the numbers causing some of my phrase to be BLAND.I dont know if I'll post a chapter so maybe, JUST maybe, I'm going to stop
"Easy for you to say, I hold too many responsibilities to the kingdom. Your only worry is your relationship with the blacksmith's daughter." I said teasingly.
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