Sucker for these stories! It was quite a nice and enjoyable read. Hmm. How can I help? I humbly suggest that the author use Grammarly app to further improve tiny grammar and capitalization missed. Please keep it up May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, learn more, and maybe earn more soon!
Just reading the title I have a few associtions in my mind ;) Firts "24 Hours to Live" - science fiction action thriller with Ethan Hawke, Xu Qing... Second "24" - action drama created by Joel Surnow and Robert Cochran with oustanding Kiefer Sutherland... After a few chapters I know from were are you from :) I mean in the sense that I know what kind of books/movies you like, and I can see clearly some influences... I like your idea for the storyline. There are a few stylistic errors, but doesn't really matter...
Well done!
the synopsis of this reminds me of sss class suicide hunter anyway this seems cool and now a song by the mad king
Gunter, why did you gunt my fries?
I gunted them, and they were mine.What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,
And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?
Gunter, there were tears there.
If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
Thai is very good and quite funny, though would prefer if you fix your grammar mistakes, but overall quite a good read, though don't make the character too op too fast.
Love this kind of stories and the characters were hilarious in the middle of the zombie apocalypse, although I suggest using grammarly to improve the grammar mistakes, and use capitalized letter at the start of a paragraph. Some of it were already good, keep up the good work! and also good luck on the contest!
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Well done!
Gunter, why did you gunt my fries?
I gunted them, and they were mine.What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,
And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?
Gunter, there were tears there.
If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
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