I Created A Wealthy Island By Fishing

Muy buena historia y desarrollo espero que la traduzca, porque es muy buena y más porque hay varias historias parecidas y no las terminan de traducir

that novel went from barely readable to downright fuскing embarassing as soon as the author introduced a woman. it's really hard not to cringe

Es bastante buena la verdad pero no deberías volverlo tan op de golpe sino que sea más lento para que la historia se desarrolle y tenga rivales así sería muy buena la historia además métele ecchi no joda

a island game where u owe someone a substantial amout of money(bells) in the form of a loan for a house and have to farm,mine,fish ect to repay the loan hmmm author be honest how many hours did u put in

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This novel had potential but got wasted by a world chat and a lot of stupid things.........................................................................

Very interesting!

Writing quality: Very good actually, couldn't find errors, lots of vocabulary and nice sentence structure.

Story development: *little spoiler so beware*

Mc plays a game then doze off to find himself in that game. There are many like him and some even before. In the game they need to pay a loan and that's all otherwise it's gonna be a full-scale spoiler.

character design: Yeah basic like every new novel. No uniqueness but that's ok

updating stability: Yeah I think this one there's no need to say anything

World background: Interesting premises, I read something rather similar where everyone kinda have an island for themselves but its dropped so I think that author is not even gonna know but yeah the background kinda similar.
A lot of potential so I hope it gets picked