I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

It's alright.The main issue for me is the change in writing style. In later chapters it's written in such a melodramatic way. For example  a character will be fighting to save a city and it will say, "She must retain her boundless resolve to sacrifice herself for justice. The fate of the world depended on her and she must not falter." Then it will keep going like that for 2 or 3 paragraphs before doing any fighting. It also began to focus mostly on everyone except the main character. It's not unreasonable given the setup of the MC staying behind the scenes in his dungeon, but I liked how Top Tier Providence balanced that better.Except... the other characters are actually more interesting than the MC and his subordinates. Because the MC and his crew become cardboard cutouts who pretty much only say cringe and cliche villain lines.

author spent 13 chapters on an auction.... Seriously? entire auction "arc" felt super drawn out, and the mc at times just feels like a side character that uses his powers to strengthen the true mc Elara

i have read up to chapter 50. overall, it's a novel you could read, but don't expect something with a lot of depth. here and there are some questionable aspects. if you overlook that it's good. but couldn't really interest me enough to continue to read it. just not my kind of novel, it seems.

Love the story, it's just that I saw that there's a harem tag now... is it really going to be a harem Author-san?

Love the novel is a masterpiece. It just seen like the chapters get shorter. Everything else is good development and all just hope it doesn’t turn in to a harem

I’m caught up on this novel, and enjoyed it for the most part. The MC being a villain is a nice change of pace compared to most novels. Additionally the concept is also very interesting. If you enjoy a system like power system with decent intricacy and a unique concept this is for you.

I really liked this story but I feel like the author tries to draw out the story and plot as much as he can to the point I start to get bored and the grammar need a fix the author legit thows as many useless words as he can into the grammer that u end up reading 13 chapter “arc” on a auction because every word is split into 5 words because it sounds better when it really just draws it out