I Create An Unparalleled Divine Dynasty

Definitely has the potential to be a very interesting read. Hopefully it gets picked.






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Rubbish. First few chapters and there are already inconsistencies and signs of padding for word count.

Translation is somewhere between average to bad, characters are not described and the world background is generic xianxia.

looks awesome but probaly wont get picked so people whats the raw before its gone?

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Review time, 7 chapters. (For those who need it)

I am honestly disappointed. The sypnosis seem interesting and well, it kinda disappointed me.

Like the sypnosis said, the mc needs to create wonders. But it's just blueprints from the system. It automatically create auspicious effects. The only people who believe in it are his own sect disciples so there is no actual story behind everything.

All what the mc need is materials and the system will create effects for the wonder he creates. Then because the disciples believe in him, the mc gains the abilities in the said wonder. Very disappointing.

World background is the same as any cultivation novel.

Translation Quality: 5* (as always)
SoU: 5* (as always)
Story Development: 2*
Character Design: 2*
World Background: 2*

Overall score: 3.2
Personal score: 1.5

raw please

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