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The story is pretty good so far. I like the quality and detailed background and all, just MC needs to show off power more, though I get why he's not, reasonable motives. Maybe less buildup, more climax scenes. Or just write more, don't leave us waiting. Keep it up!
Found this a bIt too late, author already demoralized :(. hopefully author comes back. I got really absorbed into reading it, I really liked it. Plz Come back author i want to see how the mc grows.
broooo the storyline seems really cool and interesting but the writing style just doesn't work out for me at least. Plus about proving to Sam's fam he could have just shown the contract and surely even he could have understood that flauting his position in the guild could improve Sam and Chad's standing plus the ""how magical"" and "how troublesome" bit would have been funny if used less. Rn they just came off as irritating
Great cover, first of all, love it. The novel is a pretty fun read as well. System novels are rarely well done but this ones really interesting. Fantastic work on grammar as well. Hope to see more of it in the future :)
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