I CHOSE to be a VILLAIN, not a THIRD-RATE EXTRA!!

Reading the first few chapters I was intrigued with the story, it had potential. However the grammar and writing are confusing, this is harsh but I can barely understand the story.

It's your usual cr@pxia novel with the mc returning from immortal world and then sees he has twins . Sh*itty concept and the world is bad, too many you g masters , too many people offending him left and right. Extremely poor novel , wouldn't recommend it for reading if it didn't had those daughters in it . But even with them this novel is way too bad. It's totally the generic of generic novels

not that good especially towards the end he becomes completely hateful and romance is thrash

The premise is interesting and the story isn’t bad but what kills it for me is the grammar!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MC is just a beta male who thinks with his lower half. Indecisive . Aversive to killing . 🤮

"An orphan I see" The receptionist suddenly said and typed more words onto the crystal ball.

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For rest of the night they kept planning about the fresher's party. The discussion was never ending as they were confused how they'll style their saree. They were so lost in their conversation that they forgot to have dinner. Both of them slept while talking.