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Mc had second chance so he back in timeline before apo.
And of course it will strong and cunning mc.
I just hope you can add some romance, but not too much.
The problem is the author interrupts that for what is essentially a side quest. Breaking all sense of urgency and emersion from it. Its like someone is running in the Olympics is about to get gold and then hits the breaks to check his phone real quick, only for everyone to gain on him and surpass him.
To me breaking that momentum cost the story a large part of its appeal, resulting in a less extravagant rating.
The worst thing is that I get the how and why the author did it. Even if it would not have gotten past an editor and instead would have been moved to the day after the mass grinding race before betas end...
Certainly the info dump on items that would later exist in the real life game but did not exist yet and the shorter chapters really didn't help things.
Thus my recommendation is this:
Read the story if you're alright with such mistakes every now and then and simply enjoy a good concept more than the pacing and timing of stories over all.
For a novel on webnovel, this has a great concept and nice story, if it sees a worthy editor as a completed story, I have no doubt it would sell as a stand alone ebook.
Cool start and then ... Boring
Cool start and then ... Boring
Cool start and then ... Boring
Cool start and then ... Boring
Cool start and then ... Boring
Cool start and then ... Boring