Needs edited by a human again. Too many wrong pronouns which at some points were 2 or 3 different wrong pronouns per sentence severely breaking up my reading enjoyment and even confusing me as to who was supposed to be saying what.
what is this?Every beast here has EQ equal to humans!Even wolves in this novel longs for familial love.Even being a bad beast in this novel is by bullying girls.
Great potential.. keep it up!!!..
the plot story of the beast who not different from human.. gave us.. a special taste in this story..
Waiting for another chapter.. wish you could keep the great work..
☹️☹️ Read too many Chinese novel and similar plot...
Power system - N/A
Worldbuilding - N/A
Character - 1/10
Started the novel with good feeling with high hope.
Start of the novel was good, kept me interested.
First interaction Still manage to keep my attention.
Boom
Mob characters introduced and started dissing MC
(I’m like cmon focus on the MC and his inner thought and actions instead of this bs but no~)
More pointless dialogue then “your pet only have 1 skill” (something like that)
Here comes the MC with the tipical CN MC move “I will prove you wrong”.
Started showing off (suppose to be face slapping but all I can think of is ‘what is the point of this, u are here to test out your pet power so do it and leave’)
Destroyed the machine (MC is poor and doesn’t have enough money to pay for the machine)
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I like the story though! Keep it up!
御兽：我能听到兽宠的心声 . I HAVEN'T READ IT SO IDK . I'M GOING TO START SO CHAOO
the plot story of the beast who not different from human.. gave us.. a special taste in this story..
Waiting for another chapter.. wish you could keep the great work..
☹️☹️ Read too many Chinese novel and similar plot...
Power system - N/A
Worldbuilding - N/A
Character - 1/10
Started the novel with good feeling with high hope.
Start of the novel was good, kept me interested.
First interaction Still manage to keep my attention.
Boom
Mob characters introduced and started dissing MC
(I’m like cmon focus on the MC and his inner thought and actions instead of this bs but no~)
More pointless dialogue then “your pet only have 1 skill” (something like that)
Here comes the MC with the tipical CN MC move “I will prove you wrong”.
Started showing off (suppose to be face slapping but all I can think of is ‘what is the point of this, u are here to test out your pet power so do it and leave’)
Destroyed the machine (MC is poor and doesn’t have enough money to pay for the machine)
Couldn’t continue reading
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